$15 gift card reward. The best game story (Be Free Or Die Zombies)

[stubbornmoose]

$15 gift card reward. The best game story (Be Free Or Die Zombies)

To make it easier for you guys to participate I have decided to make it free for a couple of days. So you can install it, play with it, comment on it and
win a real money ;) Oh well, not directly but as a reward I will provide a $15 dollar iTunes gift card to the winner.

How it works:

Install this application for free, play with it for a while. As you can see there is no story in this game, just “kill them all”. So think about how it should be, write a story for each level or even stories for new levels.
Let your imagination run wild ;)

I will create a committee (by the way anyone can apply, only a real gamers of course) and they will choose a winner.
There will be only one winner though and he will get a reward iTunes card.

What should this story be about?
Anything you want ;)

When the contest ends?
Take your time, not earlier than next Monday, but it could be extended I will let you know.

So how does it sound?

[Illegal Danish]

it sounds great I will download asap

[KGameLover1]

$15 gift card reward. The best game story (Be Free Or Die Zombies)

To make it easier for you guys to participate I have decided to make it free for a couple of days. So you can install it, play with it, comment on it and
win a real money ;) Oh well, not directly but as a reward I will provide a $15 dollar iTunes gift card to the winner.

How it works:

Install this application for free, play with it for a while. As you can see there is no story in this game, just “kill them all”. So think about how it should be, write a story for each level or even stories for new levels.
Let your imagination run wild ;)

I will create a committee (by the way anyone can apply, only a real gamers of course) and they will choose a winner.
There will be only one winner though and he will get a reward iTunes card.

What should this story be about?
Anything you want ;)

When the contest ends?
Take your time, not earlier than next Monday, but it could be extended I will let you know.

So how does it sound?

It's not free anymore, so IDK what to write.

[Drkdstoyer]

They are going to change the price soon, so be patient lol

[nikhsterboi]

its not free though. Why?? I will review it and am interested

[stubbornmoose]

I have requested a price update to "Free" 4 hs ago. Usually it takes approximately 1 hr to refresh those updates in AppStore. But this time it takes unusually longer. Don’t worry, just wait couple of hours, it should be updated soon.

[Foozelz]

Hey moose, can I just send you a review since my iTunes just makes me sign in, and when I do, It makes me sign in again......and again........and again......!
IDEA!
I'll send it to my email, and then upload review on AppStore on iPod!

[stubbornmoose]

Yeah, send it to me or post it here. Actually I would prefer to see it here. And don't bother submitting it to iTunes, that is not necessary

[SunriseMoon]

A story in story form, or our ideas for the story of the game?

[stubbornmoose]

Stories for this game. Right now there is no story line at all, just move around and kill everyone. How about you have to save your girlfriend trapped in a bus somewhere. Then go and save your parents living on the next street or another city, destroy a shopping mall that has 1000 zombies in it already. The number of zombies is rising with every minute ….. and so on. Try to make it by levels and logically connected. I can do some animations in between the levels etc.

[Foozelz]

STORY(More in EDIT)

Chapter 1 "The one called 'Jim' "

Your in a secured town, population 1,034. Your running out of supplies, ammo, and other important items. They send you to scout the land OUTSIDE the town for supplies, they gave you a gun, with little ammo. They say there farewells and send you off. The first place you go to is the roads near the mountains. You find a house, search inside for zombies, none....You find a TV with a scrambled picture on it, but you don't bother to car what it was. You then find a radio...you turn it on.....static.....right before you turn it off.....a voice is heard through the radio.....its saying something about a 'checkpoint'.
You turn the radio off, and raid the fridge. Then you hear a faint cry, seems to be coming from the closet.....It's a man, who goes by the name Jim. You help him scout the house for his family, which you find dead in the basement. Jim asks you if he can go along, and you say 'yes', You head back to the town to deliver the food.

Chapter 2 "Alas, Poor Zombie"
You get sent to the zombie infested city, but its a long walk, so you find a car. Jim will be driving it, and you in the passenger seat.
Jim drops you off at a safe place where no zombies are, and tells you he will pick you up north of the city. You walk past run down buildings. Then with a sudden noise, 3 zombies popped out and chase you. You kill them and enter the building they came from, You see another radio...with the same person talking on it......he's now talking about the outbreak of zombies, and where the originated from. You hear a strange noise around the corner, you pull out the gun. Then a bird is seen around the corner, but this bird did not seem normal, it had overbite with sharp teeth and glowing yellow eyes.
The bird starts to attack you, and you kill it. You find a door, and exit out. You hear fast running some where near you, then zombies rush out from a fire dept. building. You kill them. You go into the fire dept. building and scout for food. You raid the fridge and pick up a Fire Axe (Weapon), You find better clothing to wear (Have option to put it on, or save it)
You exit the back end of the Fire Dept. and you hear satanic laughing. Then you hear Jim yelling. You start running towards the noise, There is a devil like creature about to attack Jim, then your start shooting at the devil like creature to get its attention. Now the devil-creature is running after you. You kill it. You then ask Jim if he is hurt and he say no. You say to Jim to go back to the car and hide. Jim quickly goes into the car, you find one more house and raid its fridge. and find a Desert Eagle.
You get back in the car and head back for town\

Chapter 3 is coming (More in EDIT)

[Dodger123]

My story. (edit, when new levels come)


The WZK (World Zombie Killers) is an organization to defead the earth against zombies.
It was foundet 2005, when the fist zombie was "born" by the crazy scientist "Alkatas"
1.7.2005: The famous military scientist Alkatras studys with dead cells. He trys to reanimate dead cells.
29.8.2005: Alkatras could invent a liquid, which reanimates dead cells.
1.9.2005: The first experiment with a dead human.
2.9.2005: The army bans the experiment and let Alkatras go, because of too much dangers.
5.9.2005: Alkatras continues his experiments and creates a big army of zombies, to conquer the world.
17.9.2005: The first zombie invasion could stopped by some bold man, who founded later the WZK.
Alkatras could flee....

You are the best Zombie-Killer "John" and you get some missions from your boss.


Level 1 Dead Woods

The crazy scientist is there again. His big zombie army came with him. Alkatras is at the moment in the forest near of the little town Dead Woods. The local police was already there to stop the invasion, but there were too much zombies. An cry for help with the radio reached the WZK-Heaquarters. You have to find him and kill him forever.

-After the level-

The scientist escaped, before John could kill him. You don't know where he is now, but at the moment the world is save. But how long...?

Level 2 Creepy Town

An underground laboratory anatomizes zombies, who were brought to them by the WZK. At their last experiment, a zombie could escape from his cell and killed nearly all employees, who are now zombies, too. They found a way out of the laboratory and conquered the town Sowana.
You have to stop the zombie invasion.

-When Alkatraz appears-

John: Ahh there you are again.
Alkatraz: Oh. My little friend. Are you trying again to stop the invasion ?
John: I already stopped it.
Alkatraz: No, it has just begun. *evil laugh*

- After the level -

John killed the scientist and talks with his boss. After the call he turns back to the him, but he disappeared. He wasn't dead. He and some zombies could escape again.


Level 3 - Haunted House

5 month later: After the last fight with Alkatras nothing happened anymore. No zombie was sighted and Alkatras wasn't there anymore. John's boss is happy about that situation and sends him home to his family.
John hasn't seen his wife and his two little childreen since 1 year now, because of his job ath the WZK.
When John arrives at home (an old farm) he notices something strange: An black car is standing next to the garage. The front door of his house is open, and blood covers the veranda.
What happend ?
John enters the house with his gun. Suddenly the door closes on its own. It is locked and John can't get out.
With his fingers at the trigger he goes down the floor. John hears some strange noises out of the living room...

- When you have killed any boss at the upper floor -

Alkatras: Hahahahaha.
John: Alkatras, you sick bastard !
Alkatras: Welcome home my friend.
Johnu: What happened to my family.
Alkatras: Ohh.... Your nice wife and those cute two babies ? I have killed them. *evil laugh*
John: DIE !!

-Alkatras runs away -


Level 4 - Extreme Fight

John: I have to find Alkatras.
John: Oh my... more zombies.

-When Alktatras appears -

Alkatras: You are annoying.
John: You are dead now.
Alkatras: Dream on.

- When Alktatras is dead -

John: Finaly he is dead.
John: Whats this ? A letter.


Mission 5 - Be free or die

Letter:
Dear John.
I and the children are save. Don't hear at Alkatras. We aren't dead.
Alkatras said, that he will bring us to a
secret military base to experience a new hyper serum at us.
Please come and help us! You will find more information at the WZK.

In love
Mary

John: Mary.... she lives..... .
John: That is.... incredible.
Zombie: Urhchrlll....
John: Oh no. More zombies.
John: I have to get out of this house.
John: I have to be free, or I will die.
John: TAKE THIS ZOMBIES !!

- when you have killed the big fat zombie (or any other boss enemy ^^) -

John: Pew! I am out of this hell.
John: Now I have to find Mary.

__________________________________________________ ___________________________________________
HERE ARE THE FURTHER LEVEL IDEAS. A DESCRIPTION OF THE SCENERY IS INCLUDED ;)
LEVEL 6 - Plane Panic
Scenery: A devastated plane. At the windwos you can see lightnings.

After John escaped out of his house, he flies to the WCK-Headquarters.
The plane flys into a thunderstorm and there is some trouble in the plane.
When he comes out of the toilet (sry but I find this idea funny :D) all passengers are zombies. (Explanation in a later level)
John: Ohhhh.... why this shit always happens to me.
John: I have to reach the cockpit.

- After you have killed an boss -

John: That was madness.
John: *knocking at the cockpit door*
Pilot: Hey what should this terrible noise ?
John: Ahh you are not a zombie.
Pilot: Wh...What ??? Z...Z....Zombies ?!
John: Calm down. They are dead now. When we will land ?
Pilot: In 10 minutes.


Level 7 - The Journey
An dark and spooky forest. There is much fog.

At the WZK-headquarters all people are excited of the things, which happed at John's house. They tell him, that the only possible location the secret laboratories under Sowana is (Level 2)
John and 6 other WZK-Members go to Sowana. In the Forest of Sowana he gets lost and he can't find the group. His radio doesn't work in the forest, too.

John: Ahh. Souch a crap. I have to find my group
Zombie: Brahrrrl...
John: Ohhh sure..... there have to be zomibes. But I think, we seek at the right location.

- After the level -
John stands in front of a strange wall out of rosty steel.

Radio: Krzrzrzrz.....
John: Hello ? Can anyone hear me ??
Radio: Krzrzr.... John ? .. Krzrzrzr
John: Dave ? Do you hear me ? I have seen zobies.
Radio: Krzrzr.... Yes, we too ... krzrzr.... Where are you ?
John: I am in front of a wall. I think it's the wall of the laboratory.
Radio: Krzrzrz.... Follow the wall to the entry.... krzrzr..... we wait there.
John: Ok Dave. I come.


Level 8 - Laboratory of Death
Long corridors with strange numbers on the wall.
Some big glass panes, behind big white chambers with a desk, where dead zombies are liyng.
The walls are full of blood.

When John found the entry to the laboratories no-one was there. Only a trail of blood leads in to the darkness.
John: Oh my god. What happened ?
John: I have to go in and rescue them.
John: Wait Mary. Soon I have saved you.

- After the level -

John could survive all zombie attacks in this big labyrinth of corridors and you have reached a zombie-free room.
In the corne sits a scientist, he is very scared.

John: Hey. What happened ?
Scientist. Oh my god. Everything went wrong.
John: ?
Scientist: Alkatras discovered a new liquid. It shoud reanimate dead cells, but
the test subjects didn't behave like normal zombies. They were clever. They could speak and act like
normal humans. They were very clever. They could deactivate the security system and killed us all.
John: What the hell !
Scientist: There are 3 intelligent zombies now. Please help me.
John: Where's my family ?
Scientist: *swallow*
John: WHERE IS MY FAMILY ?
Scientist: Your family..... . They are.... the intelligent zombies.

Level 9 - Lost ?
The same scenery how in level 8

John: No... . No... . That can't be !
Scientist: I am sorry...
John: SHUT UP !
Scientist: Er.... there is an remedy, but it isn't tested.
John: Where is it ?
Scientist: It isn't tested already there could be some adverse reactions.
John: I don't care, it could rescue my falmily.
Scientist: It's in room RL-T88
John: Where is that room ?
Scientist: At the lowermost level.
John: How can I reach this ?
Scientist: With the ..... graaawl..... ugh...this bite hurts..... .
John: What ?
Scientist: With the elevator.
Craahhhchrlll......
Suddenly the scientist turns into an zombie. He attacks John, but he can shoot him down.

-After the level -

John: Ahh the elevator.
John: I hope I can find the remedy.


Level 10 - Unexpected Events
Same scenery how level 8 and 9

John: So where is the room RL-T88 ?
John: Here's a map. Oh.... at the end of the corridor.

After John has reached room RL-T88 he seeks for the remedy.
He finds it and want to leave the room to find his family, but suddenly.

You: Oh no more zombies.

- After the Level -

John: Where could Mary and the children be ?
John: Hey in this cell is a letter.


Dear John,

I am scared. I don't know what they want
and where I am, but I heared, that they want to bring us
to an other laboratory anywhere in Canada.
When you find this letter, we are probably away from here.
Pleas don't stop to search for us.

Mary


Please read at the next post for further levels ;)
Part II:
http://forums.toucharcade.com/showpost.php?p=781511&postcount=21

[stubbornmoose]

Sorry Dodger123 I forgot to mention. I am planning to remove a devil from the scene. A lot of people have asked me to. It doesn't really fit into the zombies game, my bad ;). I will replace it with some infected boss that actually may throw a fire balls at you or something like that.

Unless of course you really think it makes sence. It is your story though ;). Anyway I will ask a committee to abstract more from the scene and the devil will be easily replaced with an infected super powered boss or something like that during their voting.

[Dodger123]

OK. I will replace the devil and the hell, if you have other enemys ;)

[SunriseMoon]

Sorry Dodger123 I forgot to mention. I am planning to remove a devil from the scene. A lot of people have asked me to. It doesn't really fit into the zombies game, my bad ;). I will replace it with some infected boss that actually may throw a fire balls at you or something like that.

Unless of course you really think it makes sence. It is your story though ;). Anyway I will ask a committee to abstract more from the scene and the devil will be easily replaced with an infected super powered boss or something like that during their voting.

Wait, so he wins?

[SunriseMoon]

Level 1, Dead Woods
It's been four years. Four years without encountering a single living human. What happened so long ago? You don't remember. All you remember is a name, and...Them...

Level 2, Scary Town
That name...It haunts you...They haunt you. The name...What was it again? Oh yes, Craig...Dr. Craig...He sent the letter that led you here...That accursed letter that brought you to this accursed country.

Level 3, Haunted House
The letter was sent so long ago, you aren't sure if he is still here...You walk in, not bothering to knock, for you know They are still coming for you, you can't waste time. You find Craig crouching on the ground with a shotgun. He probably heard you enter and thought you to be a zombie. You both silently rejoice that the other is alive, and then you get down to business...

Level 4, Extreme Fight
Dr. Craig: This vial holds the liquid vital for your survival. I have already taken half of it's contents. This liquid could change a zombie back into a fully alive human, but there is only enough for one more person. If you take it, it will prevent you from turning into a zombie.
You: But that would mean the end of the human race except for me and you! That would mean there is no hope!
Dr. Craig: I'm sorry, but...It appears that there is no hope...
Suddenly, a large zombie crept up behind Dr. Craig and killed him.
Dr. Craig: Grab...the vial...and escape...before...They get...you!

Level 5, Be Free or Die
"...the end of the human race..."
"...no hope..."
Those sentences ring in your mind over and over. Finally, you stand up and grab the vial. At this point, you are ready to try anything. You take the vial to the city water plant, fighting zombies all the way. You reach the place where it will do the most damage (to the zombies) and crush the vial into the water. You hear a scream behind you. It's Them. They have caught up with you, and you knew it would happen. You grab your shotgun and say "Why are you here?" knowing that you will receive the answer you know, and you dread. Many voices answer in unison "You have something we want...That vial. GIVE US THE VIAL!" You know exactly the way you should answer them, and grab your shotgun.

[stubbornmoose]

Wait, so he wins?

Not yet ;). One or two stories is not enough to define a winner ;)

This contest will be closed not earlier than Monday. So, hurry up!!! ;)

[Dodger123]

Boahh..... added level 3-5.
Edited level 1 and 2. Total new concept ^^
And some suggestions level 6-8
More to come ;)

[SunriseMoon]

Added level 2 and 3.

[stubbornmoose]

I need a couple of volunteers to create a committee that will select a winner. C’mon it will be fun. Obviously you won’t be allow to vote for your own story;)

[Dodger123]

Whoo my post is too long :D

Part I:
http://forums.toucharcade.com/showpost.php?p=779178&postcount=12

Level 11 - Frozen Blood
It's a forest. Snow is allover, but you can see blood at the snow.

After John has left the laboratories, he returned to the WZK-Headquarters.
He looked after laboratories in Canada and found an interesting clue:
The abandoned Yerlee Institute for stem-cell research.
With a jeep and some munition John leaves the WZK and drives to Canada.
At a forest near the Institute his jeep runs out of petrol and John has to walk through the frosty territory.

- After the level -

John: Well, I think the Institute isn't abandoned anymore.
John: I need a plan, how to get in the institute.

Level 12 - A zombie odyssee
At this chapter there is a lot of story at first before the level begins ;)

It was easy for John to get in the Institute, because there were no security.
The Institute was a big bulding and the storefront was hard damaged.
The corridors were empty and John met no-one in the building.
Was he in the right building ? Then he saw a open door.
He heard someone cry. Slowly he advanced to the door.

John: Oh my.... MARY !
Mary: John ! John ! I am so happy to see you.
John: I thought that they made cruel experiments with you.
Mary: No. They only detaind us and they impended us.
John: Oh Mary....
Mary: JOHN BEWARE !

Suddenly John felt a heavy headace. He heard his wife cry and then was everything black....

John: Ohh.... where I am ?
Alkatras: Hahahaha.... . Nice to see you, John.
John: What ? Alkatras ? But how can that be ? I have killed you.
Alkatras: Well. Let me explain something.
John: ...
Alkatras: Yes I was dead.
Alkatras: After you have killed me and left your house, some of my scientist friends
get my corpse and brought me to the secret laboratories under Sowana.
Alkatras: They have invented a liquid, which is more powerful than the old.
Alkatras: Whith this remedy they wanted to reanimate me.
Alkatras: A person followed you and informed my scientists about you.
Alkatras: You should die in the plane and the man spread the virus.
Alkatras: Badly you could survive and we had to flee, without the remedy for me.
John: And why do you have abduct Mary.
Alkatras: Well, we abducted her, that you bring us the remedy.
Alkatras: The scientist in the laboratories told you a lie.
Alkatras: Your family was healthy.
Alktaras: You stupid fool brought us the remedy and i could be reanimated.
John: You sick bastard.
Alkatras: Hehehe.... . I hate your diction.
Alkatras: But when the zombies have frazzled you you can't say those rude words anymore.
Alkatras: Bye Bye. In 2 hours there are only bones left.
John: ARG !

After Alkatras has left his cell, John thinks about evacuation plan.
Suddenly the cell door opens and zombies get in. He finds his gun under his T-Shirt.

John: Showtime.

- After the level with a cool mutant boss:D-

Alkatras: You are too late John. But your effort to beat me surprises me.
Alkatras: I'll let your family free. But can you lead them out ?
John: I'll get you !


Level 13 - Be free or die 2

Mary: John, we have to get out.
John: Yes. Follow me !
Jack: Daddy I am scared.
John: Don't worry Jack. Daddy will lead us out.

- After the level with 3 bosses :D -

After John and his family escaped from the institute they flee into the forest and
try to get to the next town.

John: We will rent us a nice cottage in New-York and I stay some weeks at home.
Mary: Oh John... . :)


Level 14 - World Zombie Killers - Headquarter
An headquarter-scenery. Allover are walls with symbol of the WZK.
Blood covers the walls and desks,chairs and cupboards a lying around.

2 weeks later
TV: ... and so the WZK-Headqarters have to be under quarantine. At the moment
it is not possible to defead the zombies at the WZK.....
John: What ? Zombies at the WZK-Headquarters ?
John: Mary I have to go.
Mary: John no, please !
John: I've woked there Mary !
Mary: Take care !

- After the level with a huge boss-

Alkatras: Ohhhh John. Nice to meet you.
John: Soon you are death, Alkatras.
Alkatras: Really ?


Level 15 - Last man standing

This level should be the last level. Here should be the game concept different.
You have to fight against one very hard boss. Sometimes there come some zombies.

Alkatras: Show me your skills.

- BOSS FIGHT I -

John: Do you want to say something, before I kill you ?
Alkatras: You haven't still won fool.

Alkatras takes a injection and mutates into an big green monster.

Alkatras: I am more powerful now. You can't win anymore.

- BOSS FIGHT II
(Alkatras has some realy powerful special attaks)

John: And you have lost again. Give up Alkatras.
Alkatras: NO, that ..... can't be !!!

Alkatras grows bigger and bigger. John runs away and try to escape.
Alkatras gets John (alkatras is huge now). He tries to free himself.

Alkatras: Hehehehe.... finaly I beat you.
John: Dream on Alkatras !

John draws his weapon and shoots between Alkatras eyes.
Alkatras head blows up and his body falls on the ground.
John can free himselve and leaves the WZK-Headquarters.

John: That was our last meeting Alkatras.
Police Officer: Hey what do you do here ?
John: I killed the zombies.
Police Officer: What are you a WZK-Member ?
John: Yes. And my motto is: Be free, or die.


Whoo... that story was a lot of typing work. :D
But I hope it was it worth. :)

[SunriseMoon]

I like your story Dodger123, but it seems a bit too much like the stereo-typical zombie story. It also seems like it is getting too complicated to express in a few short scenes. If you can change the story just a bit, it would be perfect. :)

[akame]

My zombie story :)

Dead Woods Chapter -

You woke up in the dead woods. Next to you is your sergent who ask you to drive to the barracks previously. He looks motionless and dead. There are teeth marks on his neck. You found a rifle next to his body and took it up. The police car is vacant. The next thing you know is a zombie charging towards you. You sling that rifle up your hand and fire a shots at the zombie. He die crying out a ghostly scream that sends chill down your spine.

You decide to explore around. More zombies come up to you. You reload your rifle and fire a few rounds at them. You decide to find a vehicle to drive out of this woods to the nearest town for help. What is the source of this madness going around you? You asked yourself in your mind. The woods are deadly quiet and virtually there isn't any sign of life around you. You found a poster that says "Destroy the devil" at your feet. Who is the devil the poster is referring to? The words are written in blood. Before you know it, a huge red flying creature fly towards you and lift you up into the skies. The creature flown you up in the clouds and suddenly let go of you. You drop into the depths of the unknown.

Scary Town Chapter -

The creature has dropped you in the farmhouse. Luckily, there are some hay to break the fall. Your back is aching. You reach for the door of the farmhouse. Outside of you is a town. Most of houses look vacant. You walk towards the steakhouse and try to find people inside. Behind you comes a growling unfriendly sound. You swing your hand back at the person and he uses force to send you back sprawling to the ground. There is a shotgun next to you. You reach out for the gun and fire a few shots at the undead. The mystery deepens. Why is everywhere I go has the smell of the dead? You decide to explore the house on the hills.

Haunted House Chapter -

You walk in the streets discreetly hiding in shadows, avoiding the detection of the zombies. Finally, you reach the gate of the house on the hills. The house look vacant from the outside. You press the door knob and it fell off. Your goosebumps suddenly come up. A unpleasant voice send the words "now you are mine, John!" right across your ears. Right in front of you is Jane. She is your finance. But her appearance has changed. She looks transparent and you cannot reach out and touch her. You asked her what is happening around you. She explained that the town is infested with zombies after a military experiment went wrong. The experiment sent people turning into zombies mutants after the river - the source of the town's water supply is polluted with the chemicals. Jane told you that she was attacked by a zombie and she killed herself to prevent her to turning like the rest of the zombies. Your heart pities her misfortune. She told you you got to find the mad scientist who has the antidote and set things right again in the town.

Extreme Fight Chapter -

You arrive at the outskirts of the town holding the remaining bullets of your rifle. You know that you got to avenge Jane, because she died unfairly. It isn't her fault at all. In front of you is the chemical lab where the source of trouble begins. You reach for the barred wires fences and crawled up your way to the gate exit. There is a security guard who found you! You let off two rounds of bullets towards the direction of the guard and he fell with a cry. Now you got to find the mad scientist and put an end to this. The lab really looks like a maze with no tell tale signs of which directions you should go. You toss the coin to decide your direction and turned left. You found a person wearing white cape who look like the mad scientist. You followed him discreetly.

Be Free or Die Chapter -

The mad scientist is healing the wounds of the red creature which flew you up above the skies previously. He seems to be talking to that creature. You tried to get a glimpse of the creature's face. To your surprise, he look like the mayor of the town! With an evil laugh, the mad scientist said, "Now everyone is in my control. I get to rule the whole town and with you to protect me from the rest of the zombies!" The devilish red creature spotted you and made out a loud cry to alert the scientist. The scientist command the creature to attack you. You reach out for your gun and fired a few shots again. But alas! This time, the red creature is immune to your attacks. It sent a punch and you fly out of the window and landed outside of the building. You pick yourself up and found tons of zombies around you. You wondered whether you will survive this mad zombie apocalypse? You begin firing the remaining rounds of your bullets and wish the daylight come sooner...

[Dodger123]

I like your story Dodger123, but it seems a bit too much like the stereo-typical zombie story. It also seems like it is getting too complicated to express in a few short scenes. If you can change the story just a bit, it would be perfect. :)

Thaks :D
Could you say in which Levels I should Change the Story ?

[SunriseMoon]

Ok, I have finished level 5.

[Drkdstoyer]

I think akame or sunrisemoon have just about won the comp. :D its not final but thats who i am voting for :D so hard to pick :( lol ok im sending in my vote!!! (im on the board :D)

[stubbornmoose]

Ok, guys let's close this contests?

[goldglover411]

Ok, guys let's close this contests?

i want the best news spreader one to close too...but i think there are enough entries in this one

[Drkdstoyer]

I sent u mail :) may the best story win!!!

[stubbornmoose]

Great, and the winner is …. akame. Congratualations!!!

Thanks guys for participations there are a lot of nice ideas. I will try to summarize everything and finally we will have a good story line. I will post a final story in a forum.

There still one contest running:

http://forums.toucharcade.com/showthread.php?t=40478

Please help me to organize it….

[akame]

Thanks for the gift. I really appreciate the thought after I spent some time writing the story.