Please advice our new game!

[nicekhj3]

http://itunes.apple.com/app/id423745753

Here is youtube page

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gfEjaDe2IAk

Lite version

http://itunes.apple.com/app/id423746388

Our game bubble bubble 2 's local sales result is not bad. But other country's sale is not good.
We send press release and request a review to a lot of review site.
And We set our other game set free for our new game with more game button.
But press release's effect is not large and review site do not response.

Please advice our game for being better result!

[ArtCoder]

"2. servival game in very deep sea?" Maybe you could start by looking for a good translator to help you localize your game...

[Rubicon]

Couple of things scream out to me.

The game looks good on later screenies, but the first gameplay one looks kinda lame and you almost lost me at that point.

Switch the title screen to the back and drop the first gameplay one completely. From the text it looks important to the gameplay, but you got to get em playing for that to matter, and screenies are what help do that.

You definitely need help with your English, too. It's pretty good, but not perfect, and it really needs to be in your communication to the press and rest of the world.