How do you think about our banner

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  1. jc82111

    jc82111 Active Member

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    #1 jc82111, May 31, 2012
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    Our game is going to release soon, at the moment, our artiest designed a banner for the game's facebook page. Has anyone got any suggestion for the banner?

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    Thank you for your suggestion, our banner looks better now! Here is the new design
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    Here is the facebook page for "TURTLE RESCUE": http://www.facebook.com/pages/Turtle-Rescue/437754249574639
     
  2. JBRUU

    JBRUU Well-Known Member

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    The "available in app store" banner blocks the "rescue" text. It's a little annoying.

    Other than that, it looks great!
     
  3. jc82111

    jc82111 Active Member

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    @JBRUU Thank you for your suggestion!

    I think I gonna make that "available in app store" banner thinner and put it a little bit lower, so that the word "rescue" could be seen
     
  4. Greyskull

    Greyskull Well-Known Member

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    I agree with JBRUU.
    My suggestion: move the black App Store icon to the right side of the red bar, and then make the bar semi-transparent like the ribbon on the top left side that says NEW!

    Otherwise, nice design...it has a basic element of design (well, photography at least) that many gfx designers seem to forget: movement. More specifically, the way the character is situated draws your eyes across the entire advert.
     
  5. jc82111

    jc82111 Active Member

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    @Greyskull Thank you for your advice and review, We are going to re-do the banner today and put it to the facebook page
     

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