Defense Game "Star Ship" - Coming Soon

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  1. markds

    markds Active Member

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    #1 markds, Sep 9, 2009
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    Hi, this is Bluwind which developed ipob game.


    I want to introduce our new game <Starship Defence>.

    For now the new game has been done and reviewing, soon will meet with you.

    Hope generous support and will do our best to do.

    It's our pleasure to receive your special attention, and we look forward to hear more from you.


    -Game review

    Starship is a new style Defence game which combined RTS and shooting the feature.
    You could feed the wars of space excitement.


    - Screen shot

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    - Studio Site
    http://abluewind.com/
     
  2. Devilishly Good

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    cool, looks like a castle defense type game in space
     
  3. Slayer_megadeth

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    I reckon you are not a native english speaker. Anyways I will be looking forward to the game since it has RTS elements. By the way mods, wrong forum.
     
  4. jmmsmth

    jmmsmth Well-Known Member

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    cool, td games are fun..
     
  5. woonsung

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  6. Devilishly Good

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    The Underworld
    here's the video embedded

     
  7. mattyduk

    mattyduk Well-Known Member

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    "The Violence wars in Space"
    "Comming Soon"
    "Product Machine from factory"

    Forum members can give you help with English localisation if you wish
     
  8. markds

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    #8 markds, Sep 10, 2009
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    thank you. What is the appropriate way to express it?
     
  9. woonsung

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  10. thewiirocks

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    #10 thewiirocks, Sep 11, 2009
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    In english, we don't put "the" before every noun. It's only used when drawing attention to the item. This is different than most romantic languages which place a "the" type of word before every noun, often identifying gender.

    Thus in english, "The Violence wars in the Space" would actually be "Violent Space Wars!"

    Here's a set of translations for you:

    "Violent space wars!"
    "Build new ships!"
    "Upgrade your warship!"
    "Supports multiple languages!" (*cough*)
    "Coming soon"


    Considering that you have "The Violence wars in the Space" for three cuts, might I recommend you shake it up a bit? Try:

    "In the future..."
    "Defend your planet!"
    "Or die trying..."
    ________
    Buy hot box
     
  11. markds

    markds Active Member

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    Thank you very much ^^
     
  12. woonsung

    woonsung Well-Known Member

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    waiting waiting waiting
     
  13. markds

    markds Active Member

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    Wait ~ ^^
     
  14. woonsung

    woonsung Well-Known Member

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    hey come on~
     

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