Hello other developers, my new game Smash A Foe has just been released... Now I wanted to ask you, if you can tell me, if I the game description and the game pictures in the App Store should be improved? The problem is, that I am not a native english-speaker. I had someone, overlooking the texts, but I am not really sure, if the content really reflects, what the game is. I am happy about every tip from you. Thank you very much! Oliver Here is the link to the App-Store: Smash A Foe Smash a Foe in an original app from Oliver Schulze and Philipp Rager. Prepare to be entertained like never before! … $0.99 Buy Now Watch Media DetailsSmash a Foe in an original app from Oliver Schulze and Philipp Rager. Prepare to be entertained like never before! The goal of the game is to bash away at the talking heads. Only thing is you get to decide who to smash. Thanks to your trusty camera you too can be a part of the game but beware so can your enemies and friends alike. Sound is one of the greatest variables in this game. Record anything you want, including your own voice and watch as your new creation flourishes. You should heed my caution because once you start playing chances are it will be hard to stop. We recommend having a friend along side in case you completely lose track of time. Then again in the vastness of the appstore maybe this is what you have been looking for all along. A game so fun and so tightly balanced that it transcends the genre from which it came. Features: - Full HD retina support. (960x640)- Stable frame rate on all iOS devices.- Challenging gameplay that is easy to learn but hard to master- Use your device camera to customize the graphics.- Save all your friends and foes alike in a special gallery.- Supports sound recording, add your own sound effects!- Sound effects can be distorted via a pitch slider.- Multiple game modes.- Online ranking through Game Center integration.- Many in game achievements. If you experience any bugs then feel free to contact us at the following email address: [email protected] Information Seller: Genre:Action, Arcade Release:Sep 12, 2011 Updated:Nov 30, -0001 Version: Size:0.0 TouchArcade Rating:Unrated User Rating: (1) Your Rating:unrated Compatibility:HD Universal mhopson Member Sep 16, 2011 19 0 0 Maker Toronto, Canada http://www.birdblasterapp.com #2 mhopson, Sep 16, 2011 One Tip Cool game. I think the camera feature is really neat feature. Just one tip though: I think you should highlight the camera feature in your first (or even second) line of the description. When I first skimmed your description, because I didn't see anything about the camera in the name or in the first line, I almost missed it. Good luck on your app! laxaris Well-Known Member May 14, 2010 76 0 0 Developer Germany http://www.laxaris.com #3 laxaris, Sep 23, 2011 Hello, thanks for feedback, I have adjusted the screenshots to give a better impression about the game and described the features there... What do you think? TylerBetable Member Aug 16, 2011 19 0 0 http://developers.betable.com #4 TylerBetable, Sep 24, 2011 Hey laxaris, A few things: The first app screenshot should be an action shot, rather than something showing you how to set up the face for smashing. The grammar on the red banner in the bottom right is wrong. It should read "Use the iPhone camera to capture your friend's face!" Put the Crash/Bug thing at the end of the description Change the tagline, it makes no sense. "The World Is Yours" is for a strategy game, not a face smashing game. Instead, say "Frustrated by your enemy, boss, or spouse? Smash em!" The description could use some cleanup as well. For the initial paragraph, just talk about the joy of smashing your foe. For the Game Description paragraph, you should stick to bullet points like "very easy to learn!" "Smash your foes!" Hope this helps. (You must log in or sign up to post here.) Show Ignored Content Share This Page Tweet Your name or email address: Do you already have an account? No, create an account now. Yes, my password is: Forgot your password? Stay logged in
One Tip Cool game. I think the camera feature is really neat feature. Just one tip though: I think you should highlight the camera feature in your first (or even second) line of the description. When I first skimmed your description, because I didn't see anything about the camera in the name or in the first line, I almost missed it. Good luck on your app!
Hello, thanks for feedback, I have adjusted the screenshots to give a better impression about the game and described the features there... What do you think?
Hey laxaris, A few things: The first app screenshot should be an action shot, rather than something showing you how to set up the face for smashing. The grammar on the red banner in the bottom right is wrong. It should read "Use the iPhone camera to capture your friend's face!" Put the Crash/Bug thing at the end of the description Change the tagline, it makes no sense. "The World Is Yours" is for a strategy game, not a face smashing game. Instead, say "Frustrated by your enemy, boss, or spouse? Smash em!" The description could use some cleanup as well. For the initial paragraph, just talk about the joy of smashing your foe. For the Game Description paragraph, you should stick to bullet points like "very easy to learn!" "Smash your foes!" Hope this helps.
