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    • Featured by Apple all around the world - Need feedback on App Store Page!

    Discussion in 'Public Game Developers Forum' started by tcsindre, May 12, 2012.

    1. tcsindre

      tcsindre Member

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      #1 tcsindre, May 12, 2012
      Hi there! Our game (Snabbit) is suddenly featured in New & Noteworthy sections all over the world (both for iPhone, iPad, and Mac). We're getting incredibly exposure right now, and it would be really sad if we end up underutilizing it because of a poor landing page.

      As a team of two developers from Norway, we're hoping to get some help and feedback regarding our App Store page. What kind of screenshots would you like to see? In what order? Is the copy okay? Do you have any other tips?

      We are tremendously thankful for any kind of feedback, and we're more than happy to give any helpful posters codes for the Mac-version (we don't have any left for iOS).

      Landing page: http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/snabbit/id504870503?ls=1&mt=8


      Best regards,

      Sindre
      TapCat
       
    2. AppVersal

      AppVersal Member

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      #2 AppVersal, May 14, 2012
      Congrats on that one.

      No, the copywriting of the App description is not good. You've highlighted so many things all in STARS, but it fails to communicate effectively to the user what the App actually does.

      The icon and the screenshots are very good.
       
    3. lolzappan

      lolzappan Well-Known Member

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      #3 lolzappan, May 14, 2012
      Congratulations on winning the lottery! I never understood how Apple decides who gets featured and who doesn't would be great if we had some idea?
       
    4. 30BelowStudios

      30BelowStudios Well-Known Member

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      #4 30BelowStudios, May 14, 2012
      Just bought your game to try out. Congrats on the feature.
       
    5. mr.Ugly

      mr.Ugly Well-Known Member

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      #5 mr.Ugly, May 14, 2012
      make quality games ?
       
    6. nvx

      nvx Well-Known Member

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      #6 nvx, May 14, 2012
      Congrats on the feature :)
      The noseless Snabbit design is bizarrely cute, congrats also to whoever came up with that one

      +1
       
    7. KelvinZhao

      KelvinZhao Active Member

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      #7 KelvinZhao, May 14, 2012
      Great news!
      Congrats dude. =)
      Do share the effects of being featured on sales. Hehe. =P
       
    8. chris1a

      chris1a Well-Known Member

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      #8 chris1a, May 14, 2012
      Remove the anonymous quotes/ratings. Add a bit of information on the game mechanics so the buyers know what they are buying. Oh and remove the word "addictive".
       
    9. BazookaTime

      BazookaTime Well-Known Member

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      #9 BazookaTime, May 16, 2012
      Congrats.

      I honestly don't see a lot you can change on the copy, seems fine to me.
       
    10. Haldear

      Haldear Active Member

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      #10 Haldear, May 18, 2012
      I went to the page to review your text and ended up buying it :) so I suppose it was good enough for me.

      P.s. great game
       

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