Need some help with proofreading

[EDIT this is no longer needed, thanks]

Hello,

I'm wondering if some of you (native english) people might be able to proof read the text from my latest game.

Here a 2 files (there isn't a lot of text):
http://www.ovogame.com/IPhone/dev/

thanks a lot.

JC

 

You'll find the latest version of the itunes description here:
http://forums.toucharcade.com/showthread.php?t=94862

I find it pretty funny, hopefully, I won't be the only one

JC