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    • looking for Feedback on game art for my new game.

    Discussion in 'General Game Discussion and Questions' started by drzbabiboi, Sep 5, 2011.

    1. drzbabiboi

      drzbabiboi Active Member

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      #1 drzbabiboi, Sep 5, 2011
      Last edited: Sep 5, 2011
      i am looking for feedback on the images for my new game. I am also looking for beta testers if anyone is interested. i will be giving promo codes and a 25$ itunes card to one person who can provide the most descriptive and helpful feedback. Thanks in advance.

      if your interested email:
      [email protected]
       

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    2. warcrack

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      #2 warcrack, Sep 5, 2011
      Lock very nice!I want to try my chance...
       
    3. r2ks8x

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      #3 r2ks8x, Sep 5, 2011
      I Would love to be a beta tester on your game have a iphone4 iOS 4.3.3 and eventually leave a positive feedback after trying your game

      Tnx in advance
       
    4. drzbabiboi

      drzbabiboi Active Member

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      #4 drzbabiboi, Sep 5, 2011
    5. LOLavi

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      #5 LOLavi, Sep 5, 2011
      Applied!
       
    6. flameon

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      #6 flameon, Sep 5, 2011
      The shading and artwork are really nice on retina. Applied.
       
    7. drzbabiboi

      drzbabiboi Active Member

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      #7 drzbabiboi, Sep 6, 2011
      some gameplay footage

       
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      #8 spockgold007, Sep 6, 2011
      sent
       
    9. LOLavi

      LOLavi Well-Known Member

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      #9 LOLavi, Sep 7, 2011
      The build doesn't install...
       
    10. Echoseven

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      #10 Echoseven, Sep 7, 2011
      Alright, feedback you say?

      Images (left to right, top to bottom)
      Image 3: horrible, horrible, awful font. It's barely legible.
      Image 6: Red on white isn't the best choice of colors, even though it doesn't look THAT bad. Maybe consider changing it?

      The art does look pretty good, it's got it's own art style rather than quality. The problem is that there's maybe too much style. (said completely non-sarcastically)
      Just a few personal suggestions you may or may not agree with:

      The green asteroid in picture 5 (I assume it's reused) might look better if you smooth out the notch in the top and smooth out the second from the top on the right side.
      Same thing in picture one, it looks too[/] badly drawn. Smooth out the gaps, it's too blocky. If anything, make that one look more like in picture 5.
       

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