Ah, much better!
The rain is subtle, but I'm sure it looks great when the game is actually in motion. (And subtle is what you need here, so that's good.) Oh, and the rainy cloud sky dome is really nice too!
The upper right is a little crowded... May I ask what that card is with the red circle? Is it a UI element or is is set decoration like the bikini photo? If the former, I'm curious what it does. (Everything else is pretty clear: I'm sure one of the bars is health and one is ammo... icons could help tell which is which.) If it's just set dressing, it's blocking important sight-lines... maybe it could be moved down out of the way like the photo is?
Anyhow, glad you're making progress on this. Good luck!