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Need opinions on splash screen

11-14-2012, 08:22 PM
#1
Need opinions on splash screen

Please give opinions on the attached splash screen. We have removed the Title, but it went over the planet earth.
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11-14-2012, 08:42 PM
#2
It looks a little too mechanical to me, also the background maybe better with a space star background instead of that colored blind background. Also, a different text font could be used. Also a game title on the top may be nice. And I would throw the facebook and twitter icons towards the bottom.

11-14-2012, 08:48 PM
#3
Yea I agree. It looks strange without a title.

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11-14-2012, 09:13 PM
#4
just to clarify the title was removed for posting on the forum. the real screen will have the title.
11-14-2012, 09:19 PM
#5
Ah ok. It also feels too dark for me. Too much black and black thick lines. I almost have trouble making out what I'm looking at as far as the guns go.

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11-14-2012, 09:46 PM
#6
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Originally Posted by Kraspy View Post
just to clarify the title was removed for posting on the forum. the real screen will have the title.
How about putting a placeholder Title. (can be anything?) It kinda help with the look and feel of the real screen. =D
11-15-2012, 06:12 AM
#7
I like some of your color choices, for example the UFOs looks by them selves very neat.
The problem I have with the image is that it feels pretty cluttered. There is a lot going on, lots of different objects, different colors and so on (and having the title there would probably not help).
I would probably try to make the image more focused (I know how diffuse that sounds).
I also agree about perhaps switching out the background, as it is now it is very unflattering.
11-15-2012, 12:23 PM
#8
Joined: Nov 2008
Location: Porto, Portugal
Posts: 118
In my opinion, it's cluttered, the whole image is way too dark, the colors are extremely saturated and the position and sizes of the icons/menu seem a little off. I'd also like to see a version with the game's title.
11-15-2012, 12:39 PM
#9
Joined: Jul 2011
Location: bay area - norcal
Posts: 93
As Balloons mentioned the image appears too dark (specifically the weapons and ufos). Maybe brighten those and make the planet earth less bright? ^^
11-19-2012, 11:34 AM
#10
Very cool!

Only thing I would advice is maybe making the cell-shading lines a little thinner?
Maybe about half the current thickness.

In addition, some of the shadows are a little to dark and jarring. They need to be a bit softer, and not as dark. Maybe making the shot slightly "saturated" as well.

Could you post a mock title? Kinda curious what colour scheme and font you would use. (Seems like you going for the 80's Sci Fi asethetic?)