A video teaser of my game... Feedback is welcome

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  1. Stafaa

    Stafaa Member

    Dec 17, 2011
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    #1 Stafaa, Dec 7, 2012
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    I'm still trying to cut a proper trailer. The video is choppy and there's no sound because i screwed up the settings on my screen recorder. I assure you, it runs like butter on the device.

    I just need to integrate social networking and make some gameplay tweaks.

    There's 24 achievements. And earning achievements upgrades your plane in various ways. Of course there's a top score board, as well as best distance and longest flight-time. The goal is to fly as far and fast as possible.

    It started off as an endless runner and a kirby-canvas-curse spin off. Turns out a plane worked better. My goal was to make a game that can be picked up and played in under 90 seconds.

    Other weather conditions include night mode and rain, they just don't show up in this particular play-through. I will likely make the game free to play with IAP at $0.99. The free model will kill fuel refills after 75 seconds and restrict the number of achievements, as well as the ability to upgrade your plane.

    I appreciate any feedback or comments.

    http://youtu.be/v3yTcVyYnXA
     
  2. DomAjean

    DomAjean Well-Known Member

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    #2 DomAjean, Dec 10, 2012
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    Hello,

    Looks interesting. Here's a list of what I like/dislike:

    -I am not a fan of the background

    -There is no sound in your video so it is really hard to watch it

    -There are already a lot of games on the appstore that have exactly the same gameplay so maybe try to bring something new on the table

    -The camera movement is cool with the little "smooth move" thing it is pretty sweet

    -I think you should try to put your game free with ads with an iap that remove ads

    -Your video is not a teaser but a gameplay video.

    I hope this help!

    (And sorry if it sound harsh, I just want to make the shortest message possible with what I think you could improve).
     
  3. helen3

    helen3 New Member

    Dec 10, 2012
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    Good attempt.Carry on your work.You wiil be abled to get more and more.
    Regards
    helen
    Nitrotek
     
  4. Asstasticguy

    Asstasticguy Active Member

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    I kinda like the games background, but the game feels kinda empty at the moment. The game is called scribbleflight, but there isnt enough graphics/assets to convey the theme and concept of the game, if that makes any sense. But this might be really early on in the games development and I just look like a fool for telling you to add graphics to an early build.
    I believe there is alot of potential in your graphics, if it gets a little more love it could turn out to be a pretty cozy and neat experiance.
    And you should perhaps consider making the fuel gage a bar instead of a number, it would make it so much more easy to read.
     
  5. Rainier

    Rainier Well-Known Member

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    I like the concept. I agree with the fuel gauge comment; a visual bar would be better. Is there a way to die other than running out of fuel or hitting the ground? Having some antagonists to avoid (or shoot) might make it a little more interesting.

    Good luck!
     

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