A Poem if you may

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  1. Sambobsung

    Sambobsung Well-Known Member

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    Yeah. Ehm. It's a poem. The first one rhymes. They're both based on TA and I thought of this just now so :|

    Toucharcade is a wonderful place to be,
    A place to meet lots of amazing and unique people you see.
    They talk about games here and there,
    Giving Good and bad review everywhere.

    A poem is easy, instead of sentences, I came up with this instead
    This is something I did not plan ahead.
    The games here are fun,
    Games you play that are really never done.

    I've only been here a short while, and I hope I'll last.
    For this experience has been quite a blast,
    I look forward to seeing you and everyone too,
    I have yet to try the World of Goo.
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    I am new to this place.
    Filled with amazing things everywhere I face.
    An experience this has been.
    Always more to be seen.

    The depths of this place has brought me to my knees.
    This place is full of wonderful things.
    Things that I have yet to see.

    I really don't know where I'm going with this you see,
    This is the place I really want to be.
    ------

    Well yeah. That's about it :p
    I don't know if anyone has done a poem here so... Yeah :L
     
  2. KevinS

    KevinS Well-Known Member

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    That was really well done. I've always sucked at poetry, when I write it nothing every rhymes. :)
     
  3. Sambobsung

    Sambobsung Well-Known Member

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    A poem never really has to rhyme. It just sounds cool if it does :3 well for me anyways :/
     
  4. ninjackid

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    A haiku by NinJackid:

    Toucharcade is great.
    Toucharcade is really great.
    Toucharcade is great.
     
  5. Sambobsung

    Sambobsung Well-Known Member

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    That's quite the Haiku you got there.
     
  6. ninjackid

    ninjackid Well-Known Member

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    Thank you. I am an accomplished Haiku-ist.
     
  7. Sambobsung

    Sambobsung Well-Known Member

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    Considering the level of detail, it is very obvious that you are.
     
  8. ninjackid

    ninjackid Well-Known Member

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    Would you like my autograph?
     
  9. Sambobsung

    Sambobsung Well-Known Member

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    I don't know if it'd be fitting for someone like yourself :rolleyes:
     
  10. ninjackid

    ninjackid Well-Known Member

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    Very well.

    By the way, excellent poem!
     
  11. KennyK

    KennyK Well-Known Member

    I was liking it, until I saw this:

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  12. KennyK

    KennyK Well-Known Member

    (I apologise for that massive head)

    :rolleyes:
     
  13. Sambobsung

    Sambobsung Well-Known Member

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    Well, it rhymed. As long as it rhymes. Give me a month and an iTunes card and I'll try it.
     
  14. Way better poem than I'd ever write...I'm more a story writer, also I'm absolutely **** at poems
     
  15. Sambobsung

    Sambobsung Well-Known Member

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    Well thanks :3 but I thought of that poem as I wrote it. Had it been a poem that just came to me, it'd have been waaaaaay better.
     
  16. Morthizerm

    Morthizerm Well-Known Member

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    Nice poem :)
     
  17. Sambobsung

    Sambobsung Well-Known Member

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    I had to think on the fly >_> don't blame me. PigSquare could obviously do better lol.
     
  18. Morthizerm

    Morthizerm Well-Known Member

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    Why is the Hidden song here? :confused:
     
  19. Morthizerm

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    It is separate from the other 'Word of Wisdom'.
     
  20. Sambobsung

    Sambobsung Well-Known Member

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    The Lounge is where I got alot of my posts,
    But I'm not the one with the most.
    Hell I'm far far away,
    To getting there but that's okay.

    The lounge is my favourite place of them all,
    You chill talk and relax with people big and small.
    This was meant to to rhyme you see,
    Or else a poem this would not be.

    I'm running out of words if you may,
    This is where all of my poems will stay.
     

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