Images were not there when i commented. Now they are. I agree with you there not really game concepts but characters. @Game Dev, Those characters could be part of any game. How are we meant to tell what you game concept is from character designs?
Listen folks great to hear your comments, I didn't want to give too much away on the character as I wanted to see what the feedback was, the female character and the mechanic are for a word game set on an Hawaiian island. The girl is called carol who is your guide in the game and the mechanic is the antagonist. Sorry for the confusion.
Hey guys, I am also developing this project (Im the coder, Ed's the designer). Here are some promo codes for our earlier project together just to help you get an idea of our style. Here is the forum thread:http://forums.toucharcade.com/showthread.php?t=90000&highlight=good+fashioned And here are some codes for you Code: R6LFR6ARKP4M W6FKNEHMPH43 F6XRXKHWX9WW YWPKLHWHYFNE 3J7X4TWMEL6T any feedback at all is appreciated.
redesign on female character I took your points on "carol" looking to much like a boy, now on carol mark 2. see what you think and let me know
That's much more feminine but the face is probably a little bit wide. EDIT: Redeemed last code on that list for a look.
The Face still looks to manly. It needs to be more rounder. Maybe get rid of the two lines on her chin. Make her face longer then that should look a bit better.
The chin (NECK!!) lines could be moved down to near the chest area, to emphasise the bone at the base of the neck?