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09-05-2011, 08:56 AM
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looking for Feedback on game art for my new game.

i am looking for feedback on the images for my new game. I am also looking for beta testers if anyone is interested. i will be giving promo codes and a 25$ itunes card to one person who can provide the most descriptive and helpful feedback. Thanks in advance.

if your interested email:
Edgarburgos@me.com
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Last edited by drzbabiboi; 09-05-2011 at 09:07 AM. Reason: Added contact information
09-05-2011, 08:57 AM
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Lock very nice!I want to try my chance...

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09-05-2011, 09:02 AM
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I Would love to be a beta tester on your game have a iphone4 iOS 4.3.3 and eventually leave a positive feedback after trying your game

Tnx in advance

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09-05-2011, 09:08 AM
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Email me at Edgarburgos@me.com with your info
09-05-2011, 11:48 AM
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Applied!

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09-05-2011, 11:55 AM
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The shading and artwork are really nice on retina. Applied.
09-06-2011, 01:16 PM
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some gameplay footage


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09-06-2011, 01:25 PM
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09-07-2011, 12:56 AM
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The build doesn't install...

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09-07-2011, 01:21 AM
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Alright, feedback you say?

Images (left to right, top to bottom)
Image 3: horrible, horrible, awful font. It's barely legible.
Image 6: Red on white isn't the best choice of colors, even though it doesn't look THAT bad. Maybe consider changing it?

The art does look pretty good, it's got it's own art style rather than quality. The problem is that there's maybe too much style. (said completely non-sarcastically)
Just a few personal suggestions you may or may not agree with:

The green asteroid in picture 5 (I assume it's reused) might look better if you smooth out the notch in the top and smooth out the second from the top on the right side.
Same thing in picture one, it looks [i]too[/] badly drawn. Smooth out the gaps, it's too blocky. If anything, make that one look more like in picture 5.



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