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What do you think about this stage?

10-03-2011, 02:13 PM
#1
Joined: Oct 2011
Posts: 16
What do you think about this stage?

This will be a game and watch kind of game...

What do you think about my first scene?

10-04-2011, 12:30 PM
#2
Joined: Mar 2011
Location: In a car
Posts: 324
that first scene could give people diabetes

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10-04-2011, 12:36 PM
#3
Joined: Oct 2011
Posts: 16
Quote:
Originally Posted by MrLeQuack View Post
that first scene could give people diabetes
Sugar!!!!
10-06-2011, 07:38 AM
#4
Looks pretty good... and delicious...
10-06-2011, 08:38 AM
#5
May be a little difficult to distinguise the player's characters, enemies, bonuses etc from the background. May require some highlighting of different objects.

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10-06-2011, 12:20 PM
#6
I totally adore the style and design
When it comes to "readability" of your scene: It's always a good idea to change it into grayscale - you will notice that a lot of your elements have very similar values (grayscale differences) which makes it confusing for the eye to make out shapes and distinguish important from less important objects in color.

If that makes any sense. If you work a bit more in contrast and values between your characters, elements and background it would help with the overall readability.

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10-11-2011, 02:39 AM
#7
Joined: Jul 2011
Location: US
Posts: 19
Quote:
Originally Posted by mrlequack View Post
that first scene could give people diabetes
+1 :d
10-11-2011, 02:40 AM
#8
Joined: Jul 2011
Location: US
Posts: 19
I don't like the too colorful background
11-08-2011, 03:40 PM
#9
Joined: Oct 2011
Posts: 16
Thanks to everyone

Thanks for your comments!

I will post more screenshots with UI.

and more stages!
11-09-2011, 09:37 AM
#10
Joined: Sep 2010
Location: Atlanta
Posts: 184
Nice scene. Like others have mentioned though, I'm not sure if the characters match the scene well. The background has softer lines and more pastel colors, while the characters have harder and sharper lines.