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Old 08-06-2012, 03:54 AM
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Hey guys!

Look what we came up with. It seems the hero is a bit blurry... But in overall we feel great about the result!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P1XU6FLSP4I
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Old 08-06-2012, 03:57 AM
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aslo I have troubles with embedding video links on this forum... can you guys give me a hint?

I go on youtube -->press Embed --> copy the link --> post it here by clicking the URL icon. What do I do wrong?
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Old 08-06-2012, 04:29 AM
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Looks and sounds really good now , but,

The cut scenes are a little too long, as is the overall length, especially since the music "ends" at 1.02. You don't show your app name in the beginning, only at the end (that's too late).

What one must understand, is that most people don't finish watching a trailer that long, I would say most people watch between 10 - 30 sec, so showing the app name in the beginning is a must (Just don't make it too long ).

Also, now that I can't see you play, I would add some text description on how to play it.
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Old 08-06-2012, 07:43 AM
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aslo I have troubles with embedding video links on this forum... can you guys give me a hint?

I go on youtube -->press Embed --> copy the link --> post it here by clicking the URL icon. What do I do wrong?
[ youtube ] id# [ /youtube ]

Without the spaces
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Old 08-07-2012, 02:03 AM
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[ youtube ] id# [ /youtube ]

Without the spaces
it worked man! much appreciated
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Old 08-11-2012, 07:12 AM
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Much better! but I still have some feedback :-)

I think the last part of the trailer is the best. It clearly shows the gameplay and its comes across as cool.
The first part of the trailer is a bit confusing with the story and the different characters mixed into it. I am not sure how I would fix this, maybe remove all the characters and get to the gameplay faster.
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Old 08-11-2012, 01:50 PM
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Blackmagic makes a good capture device. $399. The game looks great. Fix the 3GS crash please!
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Old 08-12-2012, 02:39 PM
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Much better! but I still have some feedback :-)

I think the last part of the trailer is the best. It clearly shows the gameplay and its comes across as cool.
The first part of the trailer is a bit confusing with the story and the different characters mixed into it. I am not sure how I would fix this, maybe remove all the characters and get to the gameplay faster.
Jaeff, have to think this over... thanks! though we tried to show the story
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Old 08-13-2012, 11:06 PM
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Nice! Much better video quality.

I agree that the beginning is a little dull, but you've got a lot of slow mo in there - I think you could stick to the structure you have and just speed up the pacing. That way you'll still be telling the story, but you'll get to the good stuff before you lose people.
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Old 08-16-2012, 04:31 AM
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how much would u pay for a video creation though?
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