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new landing site - opinions?

11-29-2010, 03:27 PM
#1
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new landing site - opinions?

Hi,

I put together a new landing site - tried to keep it as simple as possible.
Would be interested on your opinion.

www.leakka.com

Thanks in advance!
Carlos
11-29-2010, 03:36 PM
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Location: Atlanta
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Originally Posted by Carlos View Post
Hi,

I put together a new landing site - tried to keep it as simple as possible.
Would be interested on your opinion.

www.leakka.com

Thanks in advance!
Carlos
Looks pretty good to me. One thing that turns me off (partly because i'm lazy) is that there seems to be too much text (under myTravelExpenses section). I know it's probably there for SEO, but I usually am attracted to like 3-4 sentences in bigger font that highlight the "wow" factors/features of the app.

One thing that may come up for people going to this landing page....yes it may state "games and Apps for the iPhone", but since only the first section displays the image in an actual phone, when you scroll down, some doubt exists if those games are also for the iPhone. Perhaps also put those shots in a device as well?

I would add "Games and Apps for the iPhone" to your page's title as well.

And instead of text that says "AppStore Link" i would use the official AppStore badge (doing this, you probably wouldn't have to show the lower screenshots within a device like i mentioned earlier)

All i can think of for now...btw, nice look games!
11-29-2010, 04:02 PM
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Thanks for the feedback!
Regarding the amount of text for my upcoming app I had also doubts. The app will be hopefully very soon accepted (today is day 6 being in review), so I can put the lengthy description to the dedicated app page.
11-29-2010, 04:50 PM
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i personaly liked the old website more..
11-29-2010, 05:06 PM
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Your font looks too unprofessional/casual-- try to get one with more serifs. The color also doesn't stand out much, so it might be hard to read for some people.

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11-29-2010, 05:28 PM
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