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04-20-2011, 06:41 AM
#1
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feed back on concept art

Hay guys wanted to see what you thought of some are ideas on the new game im working on?






Last edited by edmcelroy; 04-20-2011 at 06:59 AM.
04-20-2011, 06:44 AM
#2
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Originally Posted by edmcelroy View Post
Hay guys wanted to see what you thought of some are ideas on the new game im working on?
What Ideas? There is nothing there except your text.

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04-20-2011, 07:54 AM
#3
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Originally Posted by triggywiggy View Post
What Ideas? There is nothing there except your text.
images.

I don't know what the game's supposed to be about from those images 0_o

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04-20-2011, 07:59 AM
#4
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images.

I don't know what the game's supposed to be about from those images 0_o
Images were not there when i commented. Now they are.

I agree with you there not really game concepts but characters.

@Game Dev, Those characters could be part of any game. How are we meant to tell what you game concept is from character designs?

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04-20-2011, 08:05 AM
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The first one, the chick, she needs sexing up if you ask me
04-20-2011, 08:10 AM
#6
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The first one, the chick, she needs sexing up if you ask me
Yeah, face looks a bit like a boy.
EDIT: Is the game some Hawaiian Builder thing?

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04-20-2011, 08:15 AM
#7
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Yeah, face looks a bit like a boy.
EDIT: Is the game some Hawaiian Builder thing?
I thought it was a guy, It has a muscular man like face.

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04-20-2011, 08:27 AM
#8
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I thought it was a guy, It has a muscular man like face.
Look at the chest xD

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04-20-2011, 08:30 AM
#9
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Look at the chest xD
lols

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04-20-2011, 09:07 AM
#10
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Listen folks great to hear your comments, I didn't want to give too much away on the character as I wanted to see what the feedback was, the female character and the mechanic are for a word game set on an Hawaiian island. The girl is called carol who is your guide in the game and the mechanic is the antagonist. Sorry for the confusion.

Last edited by edmcelroy; 04-20-2011 at 09:22 AM.