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Need some help with proofreading

05-16-2011, 07:44 AM
#1
Joined: Sep 2010
Location: Morestel, France
Posts: 572
Need some help with proofreading

[EDIT this is no longer needed, thanks]

Hello,

I'm wondering if some of you (native english) people might be able to proof read the text from my latest game.

Here a 2 files (there isn't a lot of text):
http://www.ovogame.com/IPhone/dev/

thanks a lot.

JC

Last edited by Ovogame; 05-20-2011 at 09:52 AM.
05-20-2011, 02:04 AM
#2
I proofread them and sent you a PM. You did just fine.

Regards,

MoxyDave
www.MoxyLava.com
05-20-2011, 02:31 AM
#3
Joined: Jan 2011
Posts: 235
I love that!


the only thing I'd change is Iphone's to iPhone

It's well done.
05-20-2011, 07:01 AM
#4
Joined: Sep 2010
Location: Morestel, France
Posts: 572
You'll find the latest version of the itunes description here:
http://forums.toucharcade.com/showthread.php?t=94862

I find it pretty funny, hopefully, I won't be the only one

JC
05-20-2011, 09:24 AM
#5
Joined: Jan 2011
Posts: 235