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Art help

06-19-2011, 11:17 PM
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Art help




I made this as a simple design and need help creating a better environment and characters

Any advice is great also!

Last edited by Jake S; 06-19-2011 at 11:20 PM.
06-20-2011, 02:28 AM
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Is this the final work? Or mock ups?

Honestly, they look like place holders. There is no focused theme, e.g.: the arms and legs of the people don't fit. Also, the doors on the houses are kinda weird, I think they need an outline or something.

It's a little like kindergarden art if you ask me. That's just my opinion.

06-20-2011, 01:26 PM
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Hi Jake, I am available for work in 2D Artwork, you can see some of my characters at: http://cargocollective.com/isaac317 Let me know if I can help. PM or at isaac AT bendrcorp DOT com
06-20-2011, 04:43 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by kohjingyu View Post
Is this the final work? Or mock ups?

Honestly, they look like place holders. There is no focused theme, e.g.: the arms and legs of the people don't fit. Also, the doors on the houses are kinda weird, I think they need an outline or something.

It's a little like kindergarden art if you ask me. That's just my opinion.
Hehe...yeah...the art is bad. That's his point though. He is looking for someone to help him make something better. :-)
06-20-2011, 05:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Jake S View Post



I made this as a simple design and need help creating a better environment and characters

Any advice is great also!
Quote:
Originally Posted by kohjingyu View Post
Is this the final work? Or mock ups?

Honestly, they look like place holders. There is no focused theme, e.g.: the arms and legs of the people don't fit. Also, the doors on the houses are kinda weird, I think they need an outline or something.

It's a little like kindergarden art if you ask me. That's just my opinion.
Thanks for the feedback, and those are a bit less then mockups! Lol, I'm just asking for help making a better design, this is I guess what you said, a place holder until I get something good!
06-20-2011, 06:59 PM
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Thanks for the feedback, and those are a bit less then mockups! Lol, I'm just asking for help making a better design, this is I guess what you said, a place holder until I get something good!
Oh. Did not realize that. Good luck!
06-20-2011, 07:02 PM
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Oh. Did not realize that. Good luck!
Thanks!