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Need some advice if my translation is good (Korean and Italian)

01-06-2013, 08:38 AM
#1
Joined: May 2010
Location: Tampa, FL
Posts: 295
Need some advice if my translation is good (Korean and Italian)

My game has been translated from English, I need someone to quickly review the translated files and know the quality of the translation and rate them based on the following scale. This should only take a few minutes and I would greatly appreciate it.

5 nearly perfect
4 few punctuation/spelling errors, no grammatical errors
3 several grammatical errors but acceptable
2 human fixed machine translation
1 machine translation, many grammatical errors

Please provide your opinion of the translation.

The files can be downloaded here:
http://www.isotope244.com/files/mw3-edit.zip

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01-08-2013, 11:32 AM
#2
Joined: May 2010
Location: Tampa, FL
Posts: 295
Here are some example strings from my translations, how does the Italian and Korean sound?

Original
0040 Intel detected %s has started building mega unit %s
0134 Shield Range %.0f
0218 Do you want to launch your ICBM?
1023 Attack helicopter that fires guided missiles designed to destroy ground and air units.
1389 Outfit all naval vessels with specialized engineers who can make repairs at sea. Repairs one armor unit per second.

0112 Locate the building the text message was sent from
0118 Clear extraction point Alpha of hostiles
0119 Take intel to extraction point Alpha
0120 Destroy all hostile units in the area

Italian
0040 Secondo l'intelligence, %s ha iniziato a costruire la mega unitą %s
0134 Raggio dello scudo %.0f
0218 Vuoi lanciare il tuo ICBM?
1023 Elicottero d'attacco che lancia missili guidati studiati per distruggere unitą di terra e aeree.
1389 Imbarca su tutte le unitą navali ingegneri che possono compiere riparazioni in mare alla velocitą di un'unitą armatura al secondo.

0112 Localizza l'edificio da cui č partito il messaggio
0118 Metti in sicurezza il punto di recupero Alpha eliminando i nemici
0119 Porta le informazioni al punto di recupero Alpha
0120 Distruggi tutte le unitą ostili nella zona

Korean
0040 %s(이)가 메가 유닛 %s(을)를 제작 하고 있다는 정보 입니다.
0134 실드 사정거리 %.0f
0218 대륙간탄도미사일을 발사 하시겠습니까?
1023 공격 헬리콥터로서 유도미사일을 발사하며 육군과 공군을 공격하기 위합니다.
1389 모든 해군정에 수리 능력을 부여, 초당 1장갑 회복.

0112 문자가 온 건물의 위치를 조사 하라
0118 회수지역 알파의 적을 사살 하라
0119 첩보원을 알파 지역으로 호위 하라
0120 지역의 모든 적을 사살 하라

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