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Old 02-25-2013, 09:16 PM
Sambobsung Sambobsung is offline
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Default A Poem if you may
Yeah. Ehm. It's a poem. The first one rhymes. They're both based on TA and I thought of this just now so :|

Toucharcade is a wonderful place to be,
A place to meet lots of amazing and unique people you see.
They talk about games here and there,
Giving Good and bad review everywhere.

A poem is easy, instead of sentences, I came up with this instead
This is something I did not plan ahead.
The games here are fun,
Games you play that are really never done.

I've only been here a short while, and I hope I'll last.
For this experience has been quite a blast,
I look forward to seeing you and everyone too,
I have yet to try the World of Goo.
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I am new to this place.
Filled with amazing things everywhere I face.
An experience this has been.
Always more to be seen.

The depths of this place has brought me to my knees.
This place is full of wonderful things.
Things that I have yet to see.

I really don't know where I'm going with this you see,
This is the place I really want to be.
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Well yeah. That's about it
I don't know if anyone has done a poem here so... Yeah :L
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Old 02-25-2013, 09:35 PM
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That was really well done. I've always sucked at poetry, when I write it nothing every rhymes.
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Old 02-25-2013, 09:42 PM
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That was really well done. I've always sucked at poetry, when I write it nothing every rhymes.
A poem never really has to rhyme. It just sounds cool if it does :3 well for me anyways :/
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Old 02-25-2013, 10:00 PM
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A haiku by NinJackid:

Toucharcade is great.
Toucharcade is really great.
Toucharcade is great.
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Old 02-25-2013, 10:03 PM
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A haiku by NinJackid:

Toucharcade is great.
Toucharcade is really great.
Toucharcade is great.
That's quite the Haiku you got there.
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Old 02-25-2013, 10:13 PM
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That's quite the Haiku you got there.
Thank you. I am an accomplished Haiku-ist.
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Old 02-25-2013, 10:15 PM
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Considering the level of detail, it is very obvious that you are.
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Old 02-25-2013, 10:15 PM
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Considering the level of detail, it is very obvious that you are.
Would you like my autograph?
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Old 02-25-2013, 10:19 PM
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Would you like my autograph?
I don't know if it'd be fitting for someone like yourself
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Old 02-25-2013, 10:21 PM
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I don't know if it'd be fitting for someone like yourself
Very well.

By the way, excellent poem!
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